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Monday, March 2, 2020

The two princess

 THE TWO PRINCESS


One day there were two princess and their names were Jessica and Maia they were the richest princess’ in the world and everyone one wanted to be them. Each day they would go down to the beach and everyone would follow them. They couldn't even get to the sand because everyone would crowd them. Not one person who had gone to see them would leave. Once they left the beach they bought 90 packets of biscuits. With those biscuits, they made a cookie tower that was so big that they could sleep in it. The next day they ate it.
By Jessica




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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 23, 2020 at 11:52 AM

    Hi i'm Jazmin your friend from rawhiti school. I liked when you got the 90 packets of biscuits to build the tower. It was so smart to write about the princess. From Jazmin

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  2. SusanApril 16, 2020 at 8:11 PM

    Hi Jessica, I enjoyed reading your story about the princess, hope they didn't make themselves sick eating 90 packets of biscuits.

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  3. UnknownMay 4, 2020 at 1:19 PM

    Hi it Molly from Rawhiti school I liked how you used your name as one of the princes's. The part about the princes's eating all the biscuits gave me a memory when my little cousin said 'I wish I could eat 1 million biscuits'. I noticed that when you tried to spell princes's you spelled princess'. Where did you get the idea of 90 biscuits.

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